Monday, May 23, 2011

Reading Responce Draft #1

Title: The Secret Life of Bees
Author: Sue Monk Kidd

In life you childhood plays a big role in life. What you experience when your life can have a big affect on you when you get older. The book The Secret Life of Bees shows this in the book the main character named Lily her mom was killed. This was an effect onto her life because she didn't have a female role model, she became lonely, and her father started hitting her.

When lily was younger her mother was killed and it was terrible. When her mother died Lily had no female role model. Losing someone like her mother is one of the worst things that can happen they brought you in the world and, most of the time kids look up to there parents. So when one parent is killed you lose a role model in your life. "My first and only memory of my mother was the day she died" (pg.5) this quote shows the only true memory of Lily and her mom was the day she died, this quote showed that in her life she didn't have a woman to turn to.

When Lily was little she killed her mother, but it was by accident. Since this Lily became a very lonely girl her father ignored her and really didn't liker her

Monday, May 16, 2011

Writing Prompt

Question#14

1. What will I look like when i get older
2. What will be my career?
3. Will I own my own house?
4. Will I be a good cook?
5. Will I have children? And, if I do what are their name?

Response on #2

When i grow up I want to be a doctor. But, the school I am going to go to is engineering and architecture. So how am I going to go to the medical career. These are the questions that can haunt a child, deciding what school to go to to get to their lifetime goal. But as you reach for your your goal some things are going to trouble you.
And this is one of those things that is keeping me from getting to my goal. I wanna go into the medical career but, another career is opening up to me. So what will i choose what will be my career when i go up?


P.S-Ms.galang sorry this is late i got my computer taken away :(  <-----------Sad face