Reading Responce with thesis

I am reading this book called "Sold." I have been reading this book for quite some time because, I usually don't have time. In this book a lot has happened. And it gave me many mixed feelings. This book got me mad, extremely angry, and furious. I might sound redundant saying all the same words but spelled differently. But, this book really has gotten me mad.

 There is a girl and she has a terrible step dad when I mean terrible he was completely horrid. He didn't care about no one but himself. He did care about his family at all. He treated he wife like dirt not even CRAP yeah crap that is how the wife was treated. She didn't get respect and the mom of the girl was always telling her what she should do to please her husband when she gets older. She had to do whatever he wanted. Example: if he wanted his feet cleaned she would have to clean their feet. And when done cleaning the husband’s feet she would have to take some of the water and drink it. Now that is disgusting. And the step dad did care about finances whenever he got money he spent it on himself. He bought a motorcycle and a fancy suit to get the suit messed up. And the bike stolen because, he went to town flaunting when he had gained. He was just completely inconsiderate.

There is this lady in the book. She is supposed to be a good person and the book had me also believe that she was a good person I was wrong. I should have known that she was a bad person...
1) the step father sold the girl to a man
2. The man took her somewhere, and made the girl believe that they were going to the city (the girl really didn't know where they were going because, they children of the mountains thought that the cities were of gold)
3) When the man and the girl reach their destination, they went to this building and the man. And the lady who owned the building talked. The man talked to the woman and he slapped her and the woman gave the man a whole bunch of money.
4. The woman told the girl sooner or later that she paid for her and that the girl now works for her.
These are the reasons that the woman was a bad person. Seriously you are going to go through all that trouble for a girl. And the girl's job is to sleep with men that pay for her. That is just nasty it is child prostitution. Which is illegal in the United States but in the country the book was written in I am guess it is illegal but, not enforced.

Revised Responce

I am reading this book called "Sold." I have been reading this book for quite some time because, I usually don't have time. In this book a lot has happened. And it gave me many mixed feelings. This book got me mad, extremely angry, and furious. I might sound redundant saying all they same words but spelt differently. But, this book really has gotten me mad. The girl had a terrible step dad when I mean terrible he was completely horrid. He didn't care about no one but himself. He did care about his family at all. He treated he wife like dirt not even CRAP yeah crap that is how the wife was treated. She didn't get respect and the mom of the girl was always telling her what she should do to please her husband when she gets older. She had to do what ever he wanted. Example: if he wanted his feet cleaned she would have to clean their feet. And when done cleaning the husbands feet she would have to take some of the water and drink it. Now that is disgusting. And the step dad did care about finances when ever he got money he spent it on himself. He bought a motorcycle and a fancy suit to get the suit messed up. And the bike stolen because, he went to town flaunting when he had gained. He was just completely inconsiderate.

There is this lady in the book. She is suppose to be a good person and the book had me also believe that she was a good person I was wrong. I should have known that she was a bad person...
1) The step father sold the girl to a man
2. The man took her somewhere, and made the girl believe that they were going to the city (the girl really didn't know where they were going because, they children of the mountains thought that the cities were of gold)
3)When the man and the girl reach their destination, they went to this building and the man. And the lady who owned the building talked. The man talked to the woman and he slapped her and the woman gave the man a whole bunch of money.
4. The woman told the girl sooner or later that she paid for her, and that the girl now works for her.

These are the reasons that the woman was a bad person. Seriously you are going to  go through all that trouble for a girl. And the girl's job is to sleep with men that pay for her. That is just nasty it is child prostitution. Which is ilegal in the United States but in the country the book was writen in I am guess it is ilegal but, not inforced.

Responce on independant book

I am reading this book called "Sold." I have been reading this book for quite some time beacuse, I usually don't have time. In this book alot has happened. And it gave me many mixed feelings. This book got me mad, extremly angry, and furious. I might sound redondent saying all they same words but spelt differently. But, this book really has gotten me mad. The girl had a terrible step dad when I mean terrible he was completly horid. He didn't care about no one but himself. He did care about his family at all. He treated he wife like dirt not even CRAP yeah crap that is how the wife was treated. She didn't get respeact and the mom of the girl was always telling her what she should do to please her husband when she gets older. She had to do what ever he wanted. Example: if he wanted his feet cleaned she would have to clean their feet. And when done cleaning the husbands feets she wpould have to take some of the water and drink it. Now that is discusting. And the step dad did care about finances when ever he got money he spent it on himself. He bought a motorcycle and a fancy suit to get the suit messed up. And the bike stolen because, he went to town flaunting when he had gained. He was just completly inconsiderate.

Responce on "My papa's Waltz''

I feel as if I already wrote this responce. And we probrably did have this as a homework assignment. But, im going to write down a new responce. I really did not understand this poem was talkin about that this kids father. Is a real drunk that he is always drinking and that he is patting his son's head.

Ok I think that the father was pretty irrisponsible you no. Because, like he is always drinking and you know that because they say that he always is having the inger of liqer on his tongue.

I would really like to talk about when we did the skit but, everything about the skit explains what I think. The mom is like always depressed because of the dad but, she is also irresponsible she be on the drugs too. Or she is always crying b.c of the dad.

Responce on "please don't take my air jordan"

I really thought this poem was funny alittle. Beacuse it is all about this guy or kid or teenager who is from the "hood" and he is where all this clothing. And from what I read where he lives clothing really matters and in todays society clothing always matter the way you dress is who you are. And he has all this other stuff that he has that I guesss he stole too.

From reading this I really think he is poor> Like really he stole Air Jordans and shoot the person. Instead of just robbing him. Like beating him up and run instead of killing him. In this poem him doing that that makes him beyond bummy. I understand Jordans are expensive but still. And the writer is making the poem into like a little rap.

The peom was sooo rhymic though and that is what I really like about the poem. But, what I didn't like is that at the ending the guy in thy epoem wants to steal something else from someone else. I really think that is dumb he can take those jordans and sell them and get  nikes.

My Sonnet

You look into her eyes and stare all day

You gaze and gaze and stare and say to her

Today is a beautiful day today

You smile at her and say to her Heller

The glisten in her eyes shown like the sun

The winks the similes the laughs the giggles

She talks and talks till she’s all done

She talks and talks so you wiggle

You walk away and not say go away

She suddenly became much annoying

You ugly fugly woman go away

She ran away before you start saying

The worlds so slow and your so fast you pass

Me by my little eye you are an ass…..